雅思写作1

?雅思写作1：
　　在作文一中，考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。题目包括对一个问题或事件的描述，以及对考生需完成的任务的三点要求。文章字数不能少于150字，建议考生用20分钟完成。

　　作文一的评分标准如下：

　　1) 是否完成了写作要求

　　2) 连贯性和结构层次

　　3) 词汇来源

　　4) 语法的多样性和准确性

　　作文一题目类型：

　　对考生的要求考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。文章字数不能少于150字。

　　这篇作文要写什么内容

　　题目指引中会说明一个问题或情况，题目还包括对考生需完成任务的三点要求。考生应仔细阅读题目的指引要求。

　　考生需提供什么样的信息

　　考生需提供信息和/或解释一个问题。具体来说，考生需要：

　　咨询和/或提供一般性的事实性信息;

　　表达需求、要求、喜恶等;

　　表达看法或投诉;

　　提出要求、建议等。

　　考生需要对什么样的问题或情况进行写作

　　考生需要进行写作的问题或情况都是来自日常生活的，比如：

　　写信给大学住宿管理人员，说明住宿方面的问题;

　　写信给一个新加入的员工，说明其在时间安排方面的问题;

　　写信给一家本地报纸，涉及在本地建设飞机场的内容;

　　写信给一间租赁公司，要求解决住房的供暖系统问题;

　　写信给一个说英语的朋友，邀请其参加一个派对。

　　这篇作文的写作形式如何

　　这取决于写作的对象，如谁是接收人、写作人与接收人的关系等。考生应根据写作对象的不同而选择适合的写作形式，以实现写作目的，如写给朋友应用非正式的形式、写给上司应用正式的形式。

　　考生还需要其他哪些技能来完成作文一

　　准确地分析考试题目要求

　　按考试题目规定作答

　　按照英文信件的习惯作答，如提供信息的顺序、写作形式的选用、如何写作书信的开头和结尾、如何安排信件的格式。

　　使用语言准确、得当

　　连贯地、有层次地组织信息、联系信息。

　　考生无需在信件中对地址进行写作。

　　作文一是如何进行评分的

　　考官将从以下方面对作文进行评分：

　　是否完成了写作要求：考生能否清晰地表达此信的写作目的、能否完整并得当地完成了题目中的三点要求;

　　连贯性和结构层次：考生能否有效组织信息和要点、信息和要点之间的联系是否清晰;

　　词汇来源：考生使用的词汇是否广泛、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求;

　　语法的多样性和准确性：考生使用的语法结构是否多样、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求。

　　有什么需注意的方面

　　考生需将作文写在答卷上;

　　字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分;

　　文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分;

　　任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣;

　　文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

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　　达不到题目所要求的最低字数的作文将被扣分。

　　考生可以从示范作文中了解写作部分应达到的水平。

　　A part of people consist that young people shuld study all of subjects in school while others think that teenagers should devote themselves to the majors which they are good at or they are interested in.Whether they should focus on all subjects or they are interested in is a controversial issue.我大概写了一下，可能不太好，希望对你有帮助

　　请结合笔者上述内容，操练以下经博主改编成的地图题范文选词填空练习，以加强你的雅思地图题写作。（笔者这里特注，题目与范文都来自《剑5》test3 中的task 1） you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. the map below is of the town of garlsdon. a new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. you should write at least 150 words. the first potential location ( ____) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off _____to the town of hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. this site is in the ______and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. this would make it _____ to shoppers from both hindon and garlsdon who could travel by car. as it is also close to the railway line linking the towns to cransdon (25 km to the south-east), a potentially_____ number of shoppers would also be able to travel by ____. ________, the suggested location, _____, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents. theorically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including bransdon, _____as the central area is a _____ zone, cars would be ____ to park and access would be difficult. _______, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in cransdon, hindon and garlsdon, the out-of-town site (s1) would probably offer ____ advantages.

　　雅思小作文写作万能模板

　　1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___

　　According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

　　2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)

　　There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.

　　3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___

　　Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.

　　4、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____

　　Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.

　　5、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________

　　______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.

　　While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

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　　7 the pie graph depicts“`

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　　9 the table shows the changes in the number of “` over the period

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　　12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from “` to ““

　　13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in“`

　　14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of “`

　　15 over the period from “`to “`the“`remained level.

　　16 in the year between “`and “`.

　　17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.

　　18 the number of “` remained steady from “`to ““.

　　19 the number sharply went up to “`

　　20 the percentage of “` stayed the same between “` and “`

　　21 the percentage remainede steady at“`

　　22 the percentage of “`is sightly large than that of.

　　23 there is not a great deal of differece between “`and “`

　　24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of “`

　　25 “`decreased year by year while “`increased steadily.

　　26 there is an upward trend in the number of “`

　　27 a considerable increase occurred from “`to “`

　　28 from “`to “`the rate of decrease slow down.

　　29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the

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　　雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。

　　1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of…over the period from…to…

　　该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。

　　2. the bar chart illustrates that… 该柱状图展示了…

　　3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding…

　　该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。

　　4. the diagram shows (that)… 该图向我们展示了…

　　5. the pie graph depicts (that)…. 该圆形图揭示了…

　　6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…

　　这个曲线图描述了…的趋势。

　　7. the figures/statistics show (that)… 数据(字)表明…

　　8. the tree diagram reveals how…

　　该树型图向我们揭示了如何…

　　9. the data/statistics show (that)…

　　该数据(字)可以这样理解…

　　10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…

　　这些数据资料令我们得出结论…

　　11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…

　　如图所示…

　　12. according to the chart/figures… 根据这些表(数字)…

　　13. as is shown in the table… 如表格所示…

　　14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…

　　从图中可以看出，…发生了巨大变化。

　　15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…

　　从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到…

　　16. this is a graph which illustrates…

　　这个图表向我们展示了…

　　17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to…

　　该表格描述了…年到…年间a与b的比例关系。

　　18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…

　　该图以圆形图形式描述了…总的趋势。

　　19. this is a column chart showing… 这是个柱型图，描述了…

　　20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of…

　　如图所示，两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。

　　21. over the period from…to…the…remained level.

　　在…至…期间，…基本不变。

　　22. in the year between…and… 在…年到…期间…

　　23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998…

　　1995年至1998三年里…

　　24. from then on/from this time onwards… 从那时起…

　　25. the number of…remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).

　　…月(年)至…月(年)…的数量基本不变。

　　26. the number sharply went up to… 数字急剧上升至…

　　27. the percentage of…stayed the same between…and…

　　…至…期间…的比率维持不变。

　　28. the figures peaked at…in(month/year)

　　…的数目在…月(年)达到顶点，为…

　　29. the percentage remained steady at… 比率维持在…

　　30. the percentage of…is slightly larger/smaller than that of…

　　…的比例比…的比例略高(低)。

　　31. there is not a great deal of difference between…and…

　　…与…的区别不大。

　　32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of…

　　该图表表明…的数目增长了三倍。

　　33. ..decreased year by year while…increased steadily.

　　…逐年减少，而…逐步上升。

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　　With the rapid development of economy and the excessive using of oil and coal, the air is changing. And such changing also constantly influences the weather and the climate. According to the fourth assessment report issued by the Climatic Change Technical Committee of the United Nations, the human activity is the primary cause of the climate warming for nearly 50 years probablely. The human activity emissions, including the carbon dioxide, the methane, the nitrous oxide and so on, cause the global climate warming. Under the background of the global climate warming, extreme climate occured frequently and the ecological enviroment deteriorated. The air pollution become worse, which threaten the human survival and development.

　　To protect the environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, the government should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, the government should encourage the people to use the environment frienfly product. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

　　The environment problems facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.

　　o it is not a good way to raise children as then they learn that the only way to get what they want is to hit others You are obviously much bigger and stronger than your child.They become bullies at school and the work place. Why not try taking away something they like to do eg no TV, stay in their room for 1/2 hour, extra chores, no meeting friends for a week. Your children will always remember the beating & whos going to look after you when you are old and need help Also it depends on the age of the child. If my 18month old nephew bites or pinches, his parents put him in his high chair for 5 minutes.

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　　你好，很高兴为你解答：句型包括 ⅰ．主谓句；ⅱ. there be；ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不雅思写作应注意一下几点： 1、注重写好文章的框架 2、句型的多样化 3、基本这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。） 4、复杂句型 包括 ⅰ. 并列句；ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语） 5．词汇的variety 说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等 6、多举example（重要） 大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的英语基础很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我问她怎么写的， 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师， 他曾是ielts的考官， 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。 7、建议： 1）、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误， 不然就前功尽弃了。 2）例如我积累的句子： cultivate independence develop a strong sense of responsibility enhance social awareness build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character 这些句子比较常用， 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式，我觉得很不错： with unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. on one side of the debate are those who say that…… on the other side is the view that…… in my mind, i completely agree/disagree the later . there is no denying that ……has many positive effects. to begin with,……secondly, …… finally, …… however, every coin has its two sides. ……is no exception. many opponents say that …… to conclude, …..