?雅思小作文图:
请结合笔者上述内容,操练以下经博主改编成的地图题范文选词填空练习,以加强你的雅思地图题写作。(笔者这里特注,题目与范文都来自《剑5》TEST3 中的TASK 1) You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. The first potential location ( ____) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off _____to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. This site is in the ______and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. This would make it _____ to shoppers from both Hindon and Garlsdon who could travel by car. As it is also close to the railway line linking the towns to Cransdon (25 km to the south-east), a potentially_____ number of shoppers would also be able to travel by ____. ________, the suggested location, _____, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents. Theorically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon, _____as the central area is a _____ zone, cars would be ____ to park and access would be difficult. _______, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site (S1) would probably offer ____ advantages.
第一段您可以改写题目,例如:
The bar chart describes ……while the line graph illustrates… .
第二段:写柱状图。第一句概括。剩下的写两三句,具体描述柱状图所包括的细节。
第三段:写线状图。同上。
第四段:总结两幅图所包含的相似点。不用联系专业知识,只要用你的常识总结一下就可以了。
这个不好说。
要看图想表达一个什么信息。
其实不管什么图,它都是表达一个上升或下降的趋势。或者是表达几种信息之间的对比。
做这个题主要是要找准信息点。比如同类之间的对比,等等。
一般小作文里面的信息点不会多,就2到3个,只要抓准了其中的一到两个,表述清楚了。一般就没问题了。
小作文对语言的要求远没有大作文高,只要你能抓到信息点并表述清楚,那就OK了。
Good luck~
一、雅思大作文开头:开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板.nowadaysmanypeoplediscusswhetherweneedornot.nowwhether.hasbecomeaveryhotdebateinsociety.asfarasthistopicisconcerned,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.somepeoplethinkthatothersbelievethatithinkbothviewshavetheirreasons.recentlythehasbeenbroughtintofocusnowhereinhistoryhastheissuebeenmorevisible.inthisessay,iaimtoexplorethiscomplicatedphenomenonfromdiverseperspectives,identifytherelevantcontributingfactorsandbringupsomeeffectivemeasures.二、雅思大作文结构:一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples,esppersonalexamples.;段落间的平衡三、雅思大作文语言:避免idioms,famoussayings避免poeticlanguageexplainyourpointthenexplainitagaininadifferentwayuseamixoflongerandshortsentences以上从开头、结构、语言等三个方面对雅思大作文的写作技巧进行了简单的总结,考生们可以根据以上给出件建议,并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思大作文的写作技巧,从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩.
你好,很高兴为你解答:
图表作文写作技巧指引
图表类型
汉语 英语
饼图 pie chart
直方图或柱形图 bar chart / histogram / column chart
趋势曲线图 line chart / curve diagram
表格图 table
流程图或过程图 flow chart / sequence diagram
程序图 processing/procedures diagram
要点分析
A. 表格图
1横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势
2纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势
3无需将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值,对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的
说明:考察例举数字的能力和方法。注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。
B. 曲线图
1极点说明: 对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明
2趋势说明: 对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平
3交点说明: 对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明
说明:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会general classification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较native的单词和短语来描述trend。
C. 饼状图
1介绍各扇面及总体的关系
2各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较
3重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的
D. 柱状图
1.比较: similarity
2.对比: difference)
3.横向总结柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征
E. 流程图
1. 首先说明:做什么工作的过程,目的是什么 2. 准备工作 3. 按时间/过程先后描述 4. 结果 5. 简单总结(可有可无)
说明:注意流程图里的“因果关系”或每一流程的“承前启后”关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。
F. 实物/器具工作过程 1. 实物的名称,功能 2. 基本结构 3. 工作过程 4. 简单总结
G. 综合图
1不求甚解,不拘泥于细节
2分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表
3不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系
框架结构
开头:该图阐述的是______的______.共有以下几个部分组成。
shows (that) / According to / As (is) shown in … / As can be seen from /
It can be seen from / We can see from / It is clear / apparent from the figures/statistics / It is from / This … tells us the main story about / concerning / concerned with / on / related to…
分析:首先看到的是____, 在_____年呈现出____的趋势 / 占______; 其次,……第三[比
较分析]
1)内容:figure、statistic、number、percentage、proportion
…………
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这是我在雅思救星上面看到的一篇小作文范文,相信对你有用。
there is nothing unusual about energy like coalsand oils being consumed, principally becauseeconomic development depends on natural resourcesall the time. but what is happening today isextraordinary judged by the standards of the past.it is energy depletion on a massive scale and thisproblem is so knotty that should deserve our closerheed.
amongst the diverse factors contributing tothe energy crises around the world, government’sshort-sighted policies and citizens’ extravagant useof automobiles are probably the two most significantones. by presuming on their natural resources, quite a few countries, especially developingones, are eager to develop their economy in order to gain an edge over their rivals. admittedly,their intensive use of the energy facilitates, to some extent, the developments of otherindustries in short term. additionally, the amount of private cars increases at such a breakneckspeed that the petroleum used amounts to an intimidating proportion of the naturalresources.
the consequences are undoubtedly disastrous for human beings. although countries canboast their growth of gdp, their citizens have to endure the ever deteriorated environmentwith stinking gas belching from factories and vehicles, polluted water due to fuels infiltratingunderground, even ultraviolet radiation in the absence of ozone layer and,
therefore, theirquality of life is by no means improved. also, sustainable development can never come intotrue in this situation, meaning that our descendants can benefit nothing except sterile landand polluted air and water from their ancestors.
therefore, our government must take serious steps to attack those problems. the first andforemost is that governments have to reverse their mindset and no longer deem the growth ofgdp their first goal. rather, the betterment of citizens’ quality of life should deserve moreattention than the economic growth. furthermore, the use of private cars should bediscouraged by authorities, who must shoulder the responsibility of improving publictransportation in order to facilitate people as well as release the burden of energyconsumption.
in conclusion, to avoid the phrase “filthy rich” added to themselves, countries must paymore heed to the efficient use of their energy and the issue of environmental protection,while they develop their economy; otherwise, environmental apocalypse and energy crisis arefeared to happen in the horizon.
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