?雅思作文语言:
雅思写作
IELTS写作评分标准 (A类/G类)
写作考试有两部分,Task 1和task2。
Task1(20分钟,150字)
G类:书信类题目,投诉信,请求信,建议信,邀请信等
A类:图表题,曲线图,柱状图等,也有流程图和示意图等
Task2(40分钟,250字)
考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。
评分并不是两部分平均,而是以Task2为主
评分标准
简介
Task 1
Task Fulfillment (完成任务)
书信作文应该完成书信的使命,题目里的每一项要求都不可或缺。图表作文应该在对于图表所给出的数据进行分析的基础上指出图表的总体趋势和走向,并点明与总趋势不相吻合的特殊之处,而且还要有数据的支持
Coherence and Cohesion (连贯与衔接)
文章通过一定的衔接手段(Cohesive Devices)来表明上下文的连贯性(Coherence)。衔接手段,或叫语篇纽带,经常用的有(logical)逻辑、(grammatical) 语法和(semantic)语义三方面的连接词(connectors)
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure (词汇和句子构成)
文章的语言表达。 5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。 6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误,用词和句子基本准确。而7分以上的作文用词丰富(Variety)、句子结构复杂(Complexity)。
Task 2
Arguments (论证)
充分并且有力的。需要运用多种论证手法
Ideas (内容)
不要出现跑题的情况。有些学生由于词汇量有限,导致题目中的单词不认识;有些学生对于所涉及的题材不了解;有些学生没有抓住写作重点,即理解上有偏差。
Evidence (论据)
关键要合理,并且能够证明论点,论点要结合题目和实际情况
Communicative Quality (交流质量)
大体上与Task 1的Coherence and Cohesion相同,也涉及文章中代词,关联词,同义反义词等的运用。
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure (词汇与句子的构成)
同Task 1一
你好,雅思写作评分细则示例
雅思写作通常有Task1和Task2两个部分,考官给以下四项分别评等级分:任务完成情况(Task1)、任务反应情况(Task2)、连贯与衔接、词汇和句式丰富性及语法准确性。
以Task1为例,一名在IELTS学术类考试中写作获得6分的考生,达到这一等级对应的写作水准是:
(A)在任务完成方面,达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调主要特点或要点,但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。
(B)连贯及衔接方面,信息和分论点安排连贯,论证过程清楚,有效使用衔接手段,但句内或句间衔接有错误或显机械呆板,有时指代不清晰或不恰当。
(C)词汇量方面,相对写作任务而言,所运用的词汇量充足,尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出现错误,拼写和构词出现一些错误,但不影响交流。
(D)句式多样性及语法准确性方面,混合使用简单和复合句,语法和标点出现一些错误但基本不影响交流。
你好,很高兴为你解答:
Task 2的段首和结尾填空式写法段首句:
(一)对立观点命题形式的首句:
1.ManypeopledonotdoubtthatAissuperiortoB,whileothersthinkquitedifferentlyontheissueof_____.Personally,IstandonthesideofA.
2.SomepeoplesayA,otherpeopleargueB.Inaword,_____.ButIcannotagreethispointofviewformanyreasons.
3.Therearedifferentviewsconcerningthistopic.SomepeopleliketoCHOOSEA,someprefertoCHOOSEB.Personally,IpreferB.IthinkBhasmoreadvantages.
4.Frommypointofview,itismoreadvisabletoCHOOSEAthantoCHOOSEB.
5.DespitethefactthatmostpeoplepreferA,IwouldliketochooseBbecausethefollowingreasons.
6.Ingeneral,Ipreferto_____.
7.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldliketoprefer_____.
8.Whenitcomesto_____,mostpeopletendtobelieveA.ButothersconsiderBas_____.9.Whenaskedabout_____,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldsupportthatA.ButothersregardBas_____.
10.Attheriskofaddresstheissuetoodirect,IpreferAbecauseIthinkthat_____.
11.Whenaskedabout_____,manypeoplegivetheiropinionsthat_____,butotherpeoplemaysee_____differently.
12.Whenfacedwith_____,quiteafewwouldclaimthat_____,butothers,incontrast,deem_____as_____.
13.Wheninquiredabout_____,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldliketo_____,butotherpeople,whoholdanoppositeview,consider_____as_____.
14.When_____ismentioned_____,mostpeoplebelievethat_____,butotherpeoplewouldratherthink_____as_____.
15.Whilemanypeoplemaysticktomeideathat_____,Iwouldliketoprefer_____.
(二)单一观点式
A.Agree1.Oneofthegreatestwritersoncesaidthat_____.Now,itstillhasitssignificantrealisticvalues.
2.Iwouldfollowthereasoningthat_____.
3.Manypeopleadvocatethat_____.Theyclaimthat_____.Myopinionisthesameastheirsinthefollowingreasons.
4.Itotallyagreewiththestatementthat_____.Thereasonsarepresentedbelow.
5.Afterponderingthisquestiononmanyoccasions,Ifinallyreachedtheconclusionthat_____issomethingworthytodoandIcannotskipit.
6.myargumentsforpointarelistedasfollows.
7.Iagreewiththeabovestatementbecause_____.
8.Nowhereintheworldhastheissueof_____beensomuchdebatedlikeinoursociety.
9.Iagreewiththestatementthat_____withoutreservationbecause_____.
10.Thinkinglogically,Icanonlysaythatthetitlestatementisvalidbecause_____.
11.IfullysupportthestatementabovebecauseIamverysurethat_____.
12.SomemayholdtheopinionthatAAA.Butothershaveanegativeattitude.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreethat_____.
13.ManyonehavetheideathatAAA.However,manyothersdisagreewiththisargument.Butbothsideoftheproblemwhether_____aresupportedbygoodreasons.
14.Recently,ithasbeenmuchdebatedovertheproblemofAAA.ThosewhoobjecttoAAAannouncethat_____.ButthosewhofavorAAAutterasonorousvoicethat_____.
15.Recently,thereisvehementdiscussionontheissueof_____.Thosewhocriticize_____arguethat_____.Theyclaimthat_____.Butpeoplewhofirmlyadvocate_____,ontheotherhand,arguethat_____.
16.Thereisamuch-debatedproblemtodayabout_____.Thosewhoobjectto_____arguethat_____.Theyareverysureabout_____.Butpeoplewhoprefer_____,ontheotherhand,claimthat_____.
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上51雅思网,被机经里的作文题,每个都准备一篇,考试100碰到你写过的题。
写完没底去给老师看看,给你改改就行了。
有条件买本新东方的作文书,摘抄里面的好句型。
你需要的应该是雅思作文模板了,使用模板的话非常娴熟的语言能力能拿到6分,想超过6分基本是不可能的了,你的目标分是多少呢?如果超过6分了模板也没啥用了哦。
雅思写作模板一
In present-day society, the human race is progressing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound societal changes have come some sufferings, and _____ is very prominent among them. Some people assert that _____; while the adversaries strongly contend that ____. From my own perspective, their views have both merit and demerit.
Granted, there could be some positive effects ___may bring about. In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 / 语言论证。In the second place, 分论点二. 论证.
However, the opponents firmly believe that ____., and they against it for a couple of sound reasons. Firstly, ___. Secondly, ____. Thirdly, _____ In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent, 第一个观点. However, 第二个观点。 On balance, I am convinced that 自己的观点。
雅思写作模板二
In this day and age, the Homo sapiens is advancing at a shocking rate in a host of domains. Along with all the boons brought about by the high-tech wonders have come some sufferings, and the ____ is manifest among them. A recent study conducted by ____(机构名称) revealed that ____现象。Hence, it is of paramount importance that we ascertain the causes of ____ and identify the effective remedies of this phenomenon.
As I see it, the causes of _____ are manifold. Firstly, ____. Secondly, ______. Last but not the least, _____
Given the severity of _____. We have no alternative but to take vigorous measures to address this thorny issue. To begin with, -_____(resolution one): further, ____(resolution two): lastly,_____ (resolution three) To summarize, the causes of __–are multiple. I just point out some of them. But if _____, _____ and ____ work together to resolve _______, the incidence of _____will fall immediately.
雅思写作小作文常用模板句
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关于雅思作文简单句和复杂句的各应该有几句的问题简单回答一下。
1、首先要明确其实没有硬性规定要有多少句复杂句多少句简单句,雅思作文考验的是你的运用能力,技巧是次要的,多写自然就有所领悟。
2、作文的开头结尾很重要。考官一般2分钟看一篇作文,你猜他会怎么看你作文尤其开头,我认为开头语言也许比结尾语言更重要。所以希望大家在开头语言上雕琢一点。但是两者语言都很重要。而不要在文章中间刻意的追求语言,GZ没时间欣赏你文章中间的语言,但是至少要写好点。不要刻意雕琢了。
3、引用一些数据和统计资料。
4、结构一定不要再照范文那样了,也不要按照 开头+第1+第2+第3+结尾 的结构写,再那样写,绝对顶多5-6分!要学会换个方式表达,但是实际上是那样。
5、作文写离题了不要怕,中间转个弯,补救一下。写下去,6分还是有希望的。
作文的开头一定要写好!好的开头是成功的一半。当然结尾也很重要。gz一般只有2分钟看一篇作文,你猜他会怎么看你作文所以说开头很重要!我开头写了足足5-6行!!!
2。引用一些数据和统计资料,我就造了一些数据和统计资料,什么教育部的啊,国际计算机协会的啊,都是我造的。结果没想到收效还不错。
3。结构一定不要再照范文那样了,也不要按照 开头+第1+第2+第3+结尾 的结构写,再那样写,绝对顶多5-6分!要学会换个方式表达,但是实际上是那样。
4。语言上在开头和结尾要多注意,尤其开头,我认为开头语言也许比结尾语言更重要。所以希望大家在开头语言上雕琢一点。但是两者语言都很重要。而不要在文章中间刻意的追求语言,gz没时间欣赏你文章中间的语言,但是至少要写好点。不要刻意雕琢了。
5。作文写离题了不要怕,中间转个弯,补救一下。写下去,6分还是有希望的。
我考过雅思,7分现在在考托福,6.13拿了个94,口语和写作不好给你点意见你没说重要指标,你需要托福几分雅思比托福简单,大概简单5分左右(就是比如托福100=雅思7分,其实只要有95左右的水平就够7分了)大概明白了 查看更多答案>>
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