雅思作文犯罪

?雅思作文犯罪：
　　In many parts of the world, people who have violated the law are put into prison, which is a very effective way of preventing them committing more crimes. However, many experts believe that better education is probably an even more effective way of addressing the problem of crime. I would suggest that both prison and education are important and each plays a different role in crime control.

　　Prison is certainly a place where criminals can be made to understand what wrong they have done to other people and why what they have done before is not socially acceptable. In this way, these criminals will have a better chance to come back to normal life. On top of the remedial function, prison can serve as a deterrent for those with an inclination to crime. The likelihood of losing freedom in prison can most effectively stop them from doing harms to the society and other individuals.

　　Better education can also bring down the overall crime rate in any community, and it is the most desirable preventive measure against crime. To start with, education improves people’s moral standards which enable them to tell right from wrong so that they will build a robust inner wall against any antisocial behaviors. More importantly, people with better education are always able to find a satisfying career that will reward them with a decent life, and they will never think of committing any crime.

　　In conclusion, prison with its remedial and deterrent function and education with its preventive function are both needed in order to make this world a safer place for all of us to live in.

　　should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment explain your opinion and give your reasons.

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　　sent to a jail:

　　the world would be in great chaos and full of blood and violence. it is the best deterrent to crime. they will think twice before they commit a crime. the decline of crime has a direct correlation with the implementation of the practice. it serves a just reward for the heartless and merciless malefactors while a great spiritual comfort to the victim’s family. the abolition of the practice will send out a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with it.

　　i am in favor of the former view that we should retain the time-honored catholicon to ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to all these law-abiding citizens. an old saying best expresses my attitude:“mercy to the criminal many be cruelty to the people.”

　　make up for, dangerous

　　it is hard to guarantee that they have really repented of their crimes. if it turns out (结果发现) that they just pretend they repent and start anew and actually they commit crimes again, the loss and the damage to the victims will be irreparable. and also, if the police want the behaviour of the criminals to be under control, they have to spend money and time in supervising the criminals after they are set free. furthermore, once the criminals commit crimes again, it will take the police much trouble to catch them.

　　it is a great deterrence for many potential criminals. compared with the deprivation of freedom, letting the criminals do something else as punishment is too mild.

　　it makes the violent robber think twice before pulling the trigger(扣动扳机).

　　otherwise, it will send out a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with(逃脱处罚)it.

　　do something else:

　　economical, lessen the prison crowding and thus cut down on government budget,

　　the practice of sending criminals to jail can not scare off the would-be criminals. up to now, there is no evidence showing the direct correlation between the practice and the decline of crime. we should offer the offender a chance to mend his way and take over a new life.

　　anyone who is guilty of a crime, offender, criminal, killers and rapists, malefactor, villain, evildoer

　　the imprisonment has a limited role to play in eliminating crimes.

　　be unsociable and lack working skills, ignorance of the new knowledge, cannot survive in the brand new society, which changes and develops everyday

　　share their criminal experience

　　reclamation, reclaim

　　out of pulse(出于冲动), regret, be not born evil

　　if given an opportunity to remedy their faults, they would appreciate and cherish it.

　　they would not feel discriminated or exclusive by society.

　　持续犯罪的原因1：罪犯家庭的疏忽。当这些罪犯被释放之后，他们从家庭收获的不是容忍和关心，而是指责和抱怨。这种孤独感会让他们再次犯罪。更糟糕的是，由于缺乏家庭的关注，他们会与之前是罪犯的朋友呆在一起。

　　持续犯罪的原因2：他们被释放之后没有工作机会。

　　解决办法1：给这些罪犯重新生活的机会。他们的家人要给予他们关心和理解。

　　解决办法2：政府有责任制定和执行相关的法律，保护罪犯找工作的权利。

　　As everyone knows, the reality that criminals whom are set free from prison would commit again is a pressing problem confronting us in the contemporary society and exerts baneful impacts on the stability of the society. Thus, as far as I am concerned, it is of great importance for people to find out its causes and ascertain some possible solutions to address it.

　　There are several reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, this situation can be attributable to the careless of the criminals’ families. When they are released from prison, what they received from their families are not tolerance and care, but blame and complaint. The sense of loneliness would put them into fire again. Furthermore, because of lacking of attention from their families, they have to stay with friends, but most of them, are also criminals. Most important, they would fell disappointed because no one want to offer them job opportunities. It is reported that a large proportion of employers do not believe those who commit before.

　　Given the seriousness of this problem, we have no alternative but to adopt some feasible and effective measures. From my point of view, the following ones are worth mentioning. To begin with, what we should do is give criminals a chance to start at their new life, especially for their families, care and understand are very essential to those who commit before. For another, it is government’s responsibility to set down and implement relevant laws to protect the criminals’ rights to seek a job.

　　From the above , there are multiple causes, both families and society, to explain the criminals would commit again. And only when these practices mentioned above are taken will we to witness a substantial decrease of crime rate.

　　商科留学西读君解答：很多时候考试中的问题都是辩证的，不管是可不可以，只要理由充分即可。以本题为例，可以，因为纰漏犯罪细节可以让大家了解情况，防止类似悲剧再发生。不可以，要保护受害人隐私，要防止有些人掌握这些技巧有不良动机等。

　　Teenager delinquency is becoming an increasing concern. Some people claim that only lenient sentences can not curb the major crimes, therefore, their punishment should not be differentiated from the adults. However, I can not totally agree to this.

　　Those who support the same fixed sentence towards both youth and grown-ups argue that without harsh punishment, juveniles would not realize the serious after effect of their behaviour and leave the victims and their families suffering. Simply, the best solution is to treat them like the adult if the crimes they commit are every bit as heinous as adult.

　　However, adolescents do not have the same physical and mental condition as adult, so applying the same penalty is not reasonable for all situations. The causalities of high criminal rate of teenager rooted deeply in the social environment- family and media influences for example. As the young, some of them are naturally daring and knows no boundaries. If the media presents violent actions as cool, then young people may regard gangster as hero, gain sense of powerful and develop big ego by bullying others or commit severe crimes like robbery or a violent attacks as a result. To radically settle the problem, morals should be taught and the positive way to show off strength should be presented on TV more.

　　Another reason I think juvenile offenders should not be tried and punished as adult is that there is a chance for rehabilitation. However violent crimes they committed, with alternative ways of punishment or easier sentence, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gears to become leader of certain area. Compared with adult criminals, the young ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes. Once they understand the consequences of their behaviour and realize their desired goal of life, they rehabilitate much faster. Conversely, if they are punished the same way as adult, chances are that they become repeat criminals or serial offenders, since they are taught more criminal techniques and their identity of criminal is strengthened when captured in jail.

　　Although based on rule of justice, heinous acts should be punished regardless of the age, for sake of long term benefit, collaborative efforts of the whole society should be taken to save the juvenile offenders by every possible solution except for equivalent penalty as adult in many instances.

　　雅思备考

　　对于作文,是一大一小,两个作文一共三十分能拿快到二十分就已经相当的不错了。我只能告诉你一个学习作文的思路。作文这部分靠积累加上模仿,自己的思路毕竟

　　监狱满员，花销变大，是个很好的讨论点，因为额外的花销，会挤占政府的其它预算，到底花在上面值不值。

　　对于极度危险的犯人，当然是要关押，各国法律都会有的，可以讨论的是初犯，非重罪犯，是否可以更多地通过社区服务去再教育，但是社区再教育，也是要花钱的，可以让犯人出一点钱嘛，这也可以是个讨论点。

　　搜一下：雅思作文:犯人应当 关押还是再教育？展开讨论。麻烦给几个讨论点。。