雅思英文作文

?雅思英文作文：
　　Bring a friend, my heart will surge from the warm feeling of friendship and warm, but the total can not tell “friends” in the number of hidden meaning or deep or shallow, it said unknown friends continue to gather what the emotional cut . Friends are always built on the exchanges, and interest in the hobby. People’s acquaintance, congenial, friend, I believe, between love and get along, that there are a love, a love that, that a consolation, have benefited from the friendship among the people.

　　2007年6月CET作文题目

　　Part I Writing (30 minutes)

　　注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given 　　 　　 bellow:

　　欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。

　　标题：Welcome to our club

　　书写提纲：

　　1.表达你的欢迎；

　　2.对你们俱乐部作一个简要介绍。

　　2007年12月CET作文题目

　　Part I Writing (30 minutes)

　　What electives to choose

　　1. 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

　　2. 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

　　3. 以你自己为例……

　　2008年6月CET作文题目

　　一.写作部分（9：00－9：30）

　　Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Apology according to the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1.娱乐活动多种多样

　　2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性

　　3.作为大学生，我的看法。

　　2008年12月CET作文题目

　　1. 一次性塑料袋给人们生活带来便利。 广为使用。

　　2.由此带来的问,举例子。

　　3.限制使用塑料袋的意义,理论与实际相结合。

　　2009年6月CET作文题目

　　1.越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么？

　　2.也会带来一些问题

　　3.你的看法

　　Most of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy. I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.

　　lots of people never done their childhood dreams, but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change their

　　lives, sometimes, unexpected things would happen. During my curiosity personality, I

　　heard a strong fireman who wanted to be a Disneyland toy maker, and I would like to share my child-hood today.

　　My child-hood dream was created by my dad indirectly, and that was to build a school for some children who

　　could not pay their school fee in China. Certainly, my school also provides food, a place to live and

　　education of high

　　quality,

　　it would

　　need a lot of money to build a school, but nothing could stop me from pursuing the goals. On the other hand, I unearth some ways to run this school. For our students

　　, I would require them to sign a contract, the terms of the agreement are: Firstly,

　　they needn’t

　　to contribute 5f the salary for the school until they have helped three children like them in China. There are two advantages of this contract. It

　　would be

　　a large income from them, thus, it would cover lots

　　of expenditure. Secondly , the number of the beneficiary could have a rapid

　　increase.

　　Therefore

　　, maybe I

　　can not complete this dream , I

　　would suggest my son to do it. I hope you would hear about The School of XXX in China. When you hear anything about this name of school, it

　　means I have succeed.

　　我能看到的，应该还有错啊

　　我考过两次雅思，作文第一次7.5，第二次7。你这个作文问题挺多的，语法就有不少毛病，软件翻译的？结构也不合理，还跑题，题目是是否应该按照传统模式建房子，你写的更多是古代建筑的好处和缺点。先说结构吧。你赞成传统建筑模式的观点，就应该用大量篇幅写你为什么赞成。中间三段应该是前两段写传统建筑模式的优点，第三段写传统建筑模式的一些不足。开头写得不好。我觉得还是应套用模板开头。

　　Theissuewhetherweshouldbuildourbuildingsintraditionalstylesisacomplexandcontroversialone.Somepeoplebelievethat…,whileotherpeopleassertthat….AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeformer/latteropinion.（两个省略号处分别写两种观点）这段内容还行，但语法太差了。你说了埃及古金字塔的好处，最后还要拐到要求的话题上，说出按古建筑模式建房子对现代经济的影响，即括号中这句。

　　Itisindisputablethatthetraditionalarchitecturestyleandancientbuildingsareacivilizedsymbolforthecountry.TakeEgyptforexample,thepyramidisamysteryandprecioustreasure,symbolizingthewitnessofancientEgyptians.Inaddition,traditionalbuildingstructureisnotonlyasymbolbutalsoaplatform,onwhichtouristsandlocalpeoplecancommunicatewitheachother.(So,ifwebuildourbuidingsintraditionalstyles,moretouristswillbeattractedtoourcountry,whichwillgreatlyincreaseforeigncurrencyandimprovelocaleconomy.)接下来一段应继续写传统建筑模式的好处，但可以不用像上面一段那么多。可以写很多人喜欢传统建筑的风格，那些建筑看起来赏心悦目，建造更多传统建筑物能提高居民的满意度什么的。楼主自己写写这段吧，当然也可以写传统建筑其他方面的好处。这一段该写缺点了。缺点不宜写太多，不然岂不是否定自己的观点了？

　　Ontheotherhand,however,sometraditionalbuildingsarenottallenoughtoaccommodatemanyresidentsasmodernskyscrapersare.somepeoplebelievethatifresidentsliveinmordentallbuildings,theycanbreathfreshairaswellasenjoythecomfortableatmosphere.Moreover,itisbettertoselectsteelratherthanstonetobuildourbuildingsforthereasonthatsteelmaterialscanbearaheavierweightoffloorsandwalls.总算到结尾了。。。。

　　Inconclusion,thoughtraditionally-builtarchitecturehassomedisadvantages,itplaysagreatroletoreveallocalcultureandancientcivilization.AndIbelievethattheadvantageiswellworththeshortage.Soweshouldbuildourbuildingsintraditionalstyles.楼主这篇作文啊。。。除了字数多，其他真是乱七八糟啊。。。当然我写的也不完美，大家批判着看。