?雅思写作下载:
你是考英语一还是英语二
如果是英语二的话,建议看雅思小作文的范文,绝对有用,大作文就不需要了,用不了这么难的
英语二一般考图表和书信,都是雅思小作文的内容
如果是英语一的话,可以看看流程图之类,然后看看大作文比较好的句型词汇
你好,考研写作还是用考研的写作模板吧。以下内容供参考:大部分的学子在备考考研英语时,都会把大部分的时间用在了阅读、听力、和词汇上。在临考前才会突击作文,由于在写作文时,主观意识很强,没有分数的鉴定,所以大部分学子对于考研英语的作文考试时,还是不知道怎样准备的,一般还是会选用模板来进行背诵。
其实学子们可以在一开始的时候选用模板来进行练习,待熟练写作方式之后,还是要添加丰富的内容才可以。否则千篇一律的作文,怎样能得到好的分数?建议学子们从现在就开始练习,时间久了,就有自己的写作风格了,写作的速度也就提高上来了。
还要提醒大家在写作文时,要注意自己的工整,一是让老师有个好的印象分,二是写的文章要让人能看清楚看懂。还有,考研作文写得太多,是废话,写的太少,没有内容。最好字数保持在280—300字为好。
通过分析历年试题,考研出题类型不外乎四种:(问题)单向类、(好现象)单向类、双向类、图表加前三种。
一、(问题)单向 格式总共是三段
段一:S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 (S——sentence)共5句话,一共60字左右,下面给出每句话可以套用的格式,这些漂亮的格式是一定要牢记和熟背的!
S1是介绍,固定格式有
1.The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of……
2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of……
3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of……
S2+S3运用Flex 技巧进行扩展和包装,这些Flex 技巧在后面详细给出,要熟背!
运用statistics:
According to a recent survey made by Dr. Cao, head of sociology department at Beijing University,70..;and 30..(在此直接用数字,不要写英文,一般写两句随便给出两个数据足够)
S4 “同一份调查还表明…(又给出另一个数据)
The same survey also shows that +(又一数据)
S5 收尾,与S1呼应,“由此可见,…问题已经非常严重了”
It can be concluded, therefore, that the issue of……has become more and more serious (harmful).
段二:120——140字左右
开头:S1 : 10 words
1. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon (issue,tendency), various reasons (causes) have been put forward.
2.The above problem (phenomenon) may well give rise to some effects (consequences) as follow.
S2+S3+S4: 50 words
开始列举了,但是千万不要用那些滥词:first,second,firstly,secondly,印象分会降低,要用些漂亮的词,尽可能用短语:
In the very beginning,
+S2
In the first place,
In the second place, In the end,
+S3 +S4
What is more, Last but
S2,S3,S4 在简单阐述了各自一个观点之后,就开始进行Flex扩展,扩展可运用Quotation 或是Example达到增加60——80字:
Quotation:
To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what ……(President Cliton) said in an article :“。。。。”
所以,整个第二段是核心段,基本结构是:
开头S1(10字) + S2 扩展
S3 50字 扩展 共扩展60-80字
S4 扩展
段三(解决方法,suggestions) 100 words
S1 15 words
1.We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up.
2. It is high time that (immediate measures be taken now.) (such a problem be put an end to.) (a reform be made.)
S2+S3+S4+S5+S6 100 words or so
S2 On one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid……
S3 Should anyone dare to break the law, he to she should be put into jail for 5 years.
S4 In addition , our government should put in more money to protect ( encourage) …….
S5 On the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of the issue of…..
S6 Only through these measures, I firmly believe, will the above-discussed problem be efficiently resolved.
二、(好现象)单向类
段一 介绍 60 字
段二 分析 重要性原因(或结果 benefits)
做法
段三 结论(要重视)
段一 介绍
开头:Nothing can be more outstanding (meaningful ) than ……
接下来运用的扩展和(问题)单向类相同
段二 分析
(1)开头: The above phenomenon may well give rise to some benefits as follow.
(2) benefits 社会的
经济的
个人的
(3)做法
As the phenomenon is important ,we can approach it in the following ways.
接下来运用扩展技巧
段三 结论
重视 社会生活 (money, awareness)
个人生活 ( awareness,我的决心等等)
说明:该现象为较大类的,如 希望工程,就可以加上社会的重视;较小的如 交朋友,信念如明灯,就只用个人生活的做法。
开头:It goes without saying that due attention should be paid to the phenomenon.
三、双向类
(一) A1 VS A2 = contrast “对照”即是一个事物的两方面做比较,如看电视的利弊,出国留学等等,A1好,A2坏;或是A1坏,A2好;
(二)A VS B = compare 对比 即是两个事物做比较,如锻炼是跑步好还是做操好等,A B同好或是同不好
但是两种题型结构都是一样的,如下:
段一 摆擂台,展现“两”面
段二 回到A (A1)
单向分析 原因,或结果,重要性,做法
段三 回到B (A2)
段四 结尾 选择类 A or B
表态类(用死不表态法) A1 vs A2
段一
1.When it comes to the issue (phenomenon) of ……( tuition fee;TV effects), different people have radically different opinions. Some people hold onto the idea that ……. Other people ,however, deem that…….
2. As regards the issue of……,there is a popular discussion. Some people … Other people ,however,……
段二
开头:…… because of the following factors.
接下来和单向类的段二相同
段三
开头 By comparison,
A or B
In the similar way,
By contrast,
A1 VS A2
Quite on the contrary,
接下来和单向类段二相同
段四
表态类(死不表态法)
Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of …. Actually the issue is just like a double-edged sword,and we should try every means to avoid its harmfulness while at the same time, making the most of its advantages.
选择类
As discussed above, each side has its advantages and disadvantages. If I’m allowed to make a decision, I prefer A to B ( B to A) , for the following reasons. On one hand,….. On the other hand,……
应试作文杀招 之二
四、图表类
此类作文是近年来的热点,但这类作文只有段一和前三类不同,其他都一样的来写.
每一幅图画(表),尤其是cartoon, 是要表达一个philosophy(哲理),因此,段一就是描述这一哲理的段落,但是描述的时候只用一到两句话来“轻描淡写”说出这个哲理即可。
近年来几乎考的都是cartoon,但是一定不要陷如误区以为要对cartoon进行大量的描写,象今年考的养老的cartoon,其实就两句话描述一下画面就马上引出你的结论,接着就开始拿问题类作文的格式一套,so easy!
段一:
一、“从这幅漫画中我们可以得出这样一个结论:……”
1.As can be seen from the cartoon,we are able to arrive at a conclusion that ……
2. As shown from the above picture, one point is obvious.
二、如果是graph作文,则一定会有数据,就一定会表现出一定的趋势(tendency,trend)
There has been a gradual(slow,sharp) increase(decrease) in the number (amount, size ) of ……over the past few years (decades).
There has been ……increase……of …….while there has been ……decrease ……of …..
将趋势描述出来后,再在graph上找出两个同类数据来支持我们的结论就ok了。不要将graph上的数据都列举出来。
段二,段三,段四就和单向或双向作文一模一样了。
三大扩展技巧——Flex
扩展技巧是帮助自己在没话可说的时候达到快速增加作文字数的最有效的方法,运用flex的目的就是想让文章长就长,爱短就短。因此可以熟练运用flex来控制字数。
一、Quotation 引用
就是随便找一个人出来,介绍他一番,引用他的话,然后说我就是这样想的。(大约增加50字)而且引用此人的话一定要用:“。。。。”这样的直接引语格式,直接用现在时的时态,避免自己在时态上出错。
To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what President Bush said in an article: “……”.
二、Example 举例(可以通过天花乱坠的想象来达到)
如:只要一举例,凡是好事就说象my friend,Jerry,怎么怎么样;而凡是坏事就说象my neighbor 如何如何。
e.g. 2000年考研作文图画是为什么船多而鱼少了呢
举例:我邻居20人,每人每天吃5条鱼,吃一年下来,可想而知道。据了解,有70中国家庭都是这么干的!(这几句用英文写出来,嘿嘿,你看看有多少字了)
因此从上面这个例子你可以发现你在作文当中写的什么内容不要害怕其是否真实,因为内容改卷老师是不会留意的,你的目标就是把作文写的尽可能的长还有段首段尾的句子足够漂亮。
三、 Statistics 统计数字
就是随便找数字,成立一个统计结果,格式可以参考我们在问题类作文段一时候的举例。
最后强调:
1.上面用英文列出的句式一定要熟记背牢,当然,你再另外总结一些类似的句式,尤其是能大量用上考研单词的句式。
2.四类作文的结构要熟记,三大Flex要时时会用,常常是无法想象或没有东西可写的时候,Flex就要派上用场。
3.训练作文可以从12月上旬开始,就拿历年的考题来,先判断是哪类作文,然后用中文把整篇文章的结构先构思出来,如今年的cartoon,说的是养老足球赛,段一就简单描述一下画面马上引出,现在养老的问题得到社会的越来越多的重视,接着段二就开始分析为什么会出现儿女不愿意养老的原因,第一,第二,第三是因为什么什么,每一点原因进行扩展;段三就提出对策(因为是问题类作文)。
每次这样构思之后,就反复背和默写句式,因为平常虽然背的多,但要是不写一下,到了临场会很生疏的。
以上就是为大家整理的考研英语作文万能模板和写作的技巧,从现在就开始练习,学习英语的道路上是没有捷径的,平时的基本功准备到位了,考试时定会得到一个满意分数。希望能对备考中的学子们有所帮助。
http://www.newchannel.org/exam/kaoyan/201209/68175.shtml
雅思写作官方题库范文大全 pdf:
http://vdisk.weibo.com/s/beew_51rsnz0
因为我并非教育界人士,所以无法给你评分,但可以替你更正文章的错漏,希望会对你有所帮助。
Some people think that increasing business and
cultural contacts have a positive influence, and others think that it has a negative
effect to national identities. What is your opinion
正文:
I would admit (要加that) the contact between different
countries have risen rapidly, and whether it (加is) a good news for our(是us) human beings is
under discussion for it is really a complicated and significant problem in the coming
wave of globalization.
With the trend of frequently connect to each
other, the world exposed (a quiet应该是: quite a) new atmosphere for business or cultural development.
In this condition, countries show their own advantages and endeavor to make more
profits. As a result, (去掉a) work can be separate into small pieces(改为lots会更好, for example, we
will found a computer which (the) keyboard is是(was) made in China,
screen is(是was) made in Japan and with its Germany battery.
Without doubt, globalization seems play(是playing) a remarkable
role in the culture evolution, although we recognize that different nations possess
its(是their) particular culture(s), which anthropologists indicated “local knowledge”, we could
not deny (加that) it gives the harsh impacts to those developing countries.
The acculturation among countries and nations
may lead the (develop of cultural 应该是: development of culture 或 cultural development) into a new degree which (加would) board(是boarden) the understanding
of human, society and nature, and those views in special aspects other than domestic
scholars or even totally opposite theories make great controversies in scholars
is better to enrich the knowledge.
One big point we should not neglect is that
the unequal position between developed countries and developing counties, as I have
concerned, globalization definitely a harsh impact, which meant they should make
a proper balance in learning from others and inherent (加their) own traditions. Therefore
the national identities seem less referred, and what’s more, people are willing
to accept modern civilization and feel shame about our(改为their own) culture. Such as todays
China, a lot of teenagers abandoned those 5,000 years history and culture carelessly.
We are not living in a(an) isolated island and
theres no chance go(going) back into(要改为: to) thousand years ago when people just live in one
place (all 要改为: their entire) lifespan. After all, when facing (加with) the positive (changes benefits 要改为: benefit of changes) from the
intimate(intimately) associated with other communities worldwide, we wont forget our nationality and heritage from the(our) ancestors.
应该能得5.5左右。原因:1. 个人观点不明晰。只是在论述过程中体现了自己的一些论调。2. 论据不充分。没有具体地解释产生自己观点的原因。3. 汉语思维严重。4. 语法错误和词句运用错误严重。5. 分段不合理。通常雅思大作文分四段。
希望帮您
说实话,一看就是模板,好像还是十天里的,我想说如果你想拿6分或者更高,最好不要用模板,这是一个高手教我的,我让她给改了几篇文章,她提醒了我这一点,最后我改过来了,总算作文过了呵呵。
模板意味不能太浓,不然有些考官很反感的,就算你的句子还好,估计也拿不到6分,我没那么厉害,光从第一段是评不出你的水平的,但是我看到你的第一段我觉得是低于6分的,因为你用的是模板,词汇也不是很高级,所以~~~~~
个人觉得作文首先结构要清晰,这个你可以参考十天,我的意思是你可以按他的结构先写双方观点再提出自己观点,但是不要用那些句子,也就是在大结构确定的情况下你可以用不同的思路或者说小结构写你的文章,而且很多高手第一段也就是背景段是写的很长的,完全不是10天所谓1+1+2+1这种,当然前提是你的大思路大框架不能散,你的构架必须是逻辑性很强,很严密的。
你好,很高兴为你解答:
雅思写作应注意一下几点:
1、注重写好文章的框架
我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师, 外国人看文章最注重的是什么, 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好, 首先看的不是他的句型, 词汇, 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚,我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头,经过, 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词, 例如:first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段, 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章, 看看他们的写作模式, 我当初写文章的时候, 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式,我觉得可以套用, 我最后介绍给大家。
2、句型的多样化
如果一篇文章, 从头到尾, 永远用的只有一种句型, 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分,我们可以适当的改换一下句型, 我给大家一定建议,希望给大家有点帮助。
3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ.主谓句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子;Ⅳ. 被动语态(我看到一张帖字说, 不要用被动, 我不这样认为, 国外的文章, 用被动的也比比皆是。)
4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句;Ⅱ. 从句(定语,状语,名词性,非谓语)
5.词汇的Variety
说实话做到这点真的很难, 首先你要有庞大的词汇量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。我自认做不到这点,所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,例如:激烈的竞争 fierce competition等
6、多举EXAMPLE(重要)
大家不要小看这点, 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说, 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理, 你有这么多话要说吗?而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友, 可以说她的英语基础很差, 但她的文章也拿了6分, 我问她怎么写的, 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师, 他曾是IELTS的考官, 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。
7、建议:
1)、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误, 不然就前功尽弃了。
2)例如我积累的句子:
Cultivate independence
Develop a strong sense of responsibility
Enhance social awareness
Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity
Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character
这些句子比较常用, 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式,我觉得很不错:
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that…… On the other side is the view that…… In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .
There is no denying that ……has many positive effects. To begin with,……Secondly, …… Finally, ……
However, every coin has its two sides. ……is no exception. Many opponents say that ……
To conclude, …..
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大作文写作——说明文模板
model c
today, there has been growing public concern about whether _______________________________________
_______________________________________. personally, i think _________________________________
_________________________-for three reasons.
the principal reason for my view is ___________________________________________________________.
it is evident that___________________________________________; therefore, _______________________
_________________________________________. in other words, _________________________________
________________________________________. for instance, ____________________________________
________________________________.
another reason for my view is _____________________________________________________. specifically,
it is generally accepted in my country that _____________________________________________________;
thus, ________________________________________________________. after all, ___________________
________________ , which means ___________________________________________________________.
additionally, ________________________________________________________________.
it seems to me
that ___________________________________________________________. this is due to the fact _______
_____________________________________________. by that i mean ______________________________
_____________________________________________.
in sum, for these reasons, i tend to believe _____________________________________________________
___________________. and overall, it seems_______________ should ______________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
说个话题(打个比方说跳槽的利弊)
switch jobs(变换工作)skip from job to job(不断跳槽)
chronic job-hopper(经常跳槽的人)continuous movement(持续工作的人)job transition(工作调动)short tenure(短的任期) employee(员工)advantages and disadvantages(优势与劣势)benefit from(从……收益)headhunter(猎头)lifer(一辈子不换工作的人)high mobility(高度的灵活性)job opportunity(工作机会)
broad range of work experience(丰富的工作经验)varied job experiences(不同的工作经历)constant refreshment(不断的更新)
job satisfaction(工作的满足感)long for challenges(渴望挑战)
adapt to(适应)abandon the old things(抛弃陈旧的东西)
high adaptability(高度的适应性)social relationship(社会关系)
make frieds with different people(和不同的人交朋友)
increase professional skills(增加职业技能)move upward(升迁)
heep skills fresh and up-to-date(使技能不断更新)
tell off ones boss(炒老板鱿鱼)contaminated reputation(名誉受损) negative image( 负面形象)live a wonderful life(过着美好的生活)
1 Job hoppers refer to those who constantly skip from one job to another.(跳槽者指的是那些经常换工作的人)
2 The wave of job switching and job transition has long existed among young workers.(跳槽和调换工作的风潮在年轻员工由来已久)
3 Young workers are generally attracted by high mobility and flexibility in job opportunities.(年轻员工通常会被工作机会高度的机动性和灵活性所吸引)
4 To them,job hopping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant refreshment(对于他们来说,跳槽意味着丰富的工作经验和人生阅历以及持久的新鲜感。)
5 Because of young peoples excellent adaptability,job hopping brings more freshness and opportunities than difficulties and pressure.(因为年轻人非凡的适应力,跳槽带给他们更多的是新鲜感和机会,而不是困难和压力。)
6 Despite all the advantages, the drawbacks can not be neglected.(尽管有这些好处,其弊端也是不可忽视的)
7 One of the potential problems is that constant job transition can not secure them a stable and bright job prospect.(一个潜在的问题是频繁的跳槽不能保证他们有一个稳定辉煌的职业前景。)
8 It is also possible that they may fall into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently.(他们可能因为过于频繁地跳槽而陷入经济困难)
9In the eyes of employers, the fondness of job seitching reflects, to some extent,their disloyalty and lack of commitment to jobs.(在老板眼里,喜欢跳槽在某种程度上反映了他们不忠诚而且对工作缺乏奉献精神。)
10 So employees are advised to make careful considerations before switching from a job.(所以建议员工们在决定跳槽之前要仔细考虑)
可能有单词拼写错误,但是已经尽力了)
大作文写作——说明文模板
model c
today, there has been growing public concern about whether _______________________________________
_______________________________________. personally, i think _________________________________
_________________________-for three reasons.
the principal reason for my view is ___________________________________________________________.
it is evident that___________________________________________; therefore, _______________________
_________________________________________. in other words, _________________________________
________________________________________. for instance, ____________________________________
________________________________.
another reason for my view is _____________________________________________________. specifically,
it is generally accepted in my country that _____________________________________________________;
thus, ________________________________________________________. after all, ___________________
________________ , which means ___________________________________________________________.
additionally, ________________________________________________________________.
it seems to me
that ___________________________________________________________. this is due to the fact _______
_____________________________________________. by that i mean ______________________________
_____________________________________________.
in sum, for these reasons, i tend to believe _____________________________________________________
___________________. and overall, it seems_______________ should ______________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
慎小嶷的10天突破雅思写作里有很多模板
我看过觉得结构很好
那些关联词很值得学学
但是最最最最最衷心给你的建议是
他那本书很多人看过(几乎每个人吧)所以大家都会用不说
我跟我朋友看过之后最切身的体会就是思维被框死
也不知道为什么照着模板写作很多本来应该很容易想到的点都想不到
因此作文也被打折扣了
不过还是给你提供一个argument的模板
第一段:nowadays,……has been increasingly concerned. weathere we should….or not is…..
第二段:first of all,…….which means(举例). moreover….. in other words(举例).further more…..specifically(举例) 这一段你是倾向的观点
第三段:by contrast…..跟上一段结构差不多 也是观点然后举例 不过是你比较不倾向的观点
第四段:结尾 in conclusion, althrough…..i still……
差不多就是这样 我上个月考完了 差不多都不太记得了= =
不过还是希望能帮到你咯~!
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