雅思写作题

雅思写作题
?雅思写作题:
  The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food.Yet,there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall of fast food has been positive or negative .I personally believe that the drawbacks of fast food far outweigh its benefits.

  It is true that fast food revolutionised the way we take a meal.Most of us have benefited greatly from its convenience,especially to those white collars with a high salary who are always very busy and unwilling to cook themselves.They can choose a combo in fast food chains like KFC or McDonalds and finish a meal within just several minutes,instead of taking lots of time in cooking and washing dishes unwillingly.

  Nevertheless,It is also a indisputable fact that fast food results in serious health problems.Foods such as fried chicken,hamburgers and chips – which are incredibly high in fat and salt – are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure,obesity and heart disease.In addition,although I certainly agree that fast food is both convenient and affordable,the cost and inconvenient of treating the illness it caused in later life are significant.In other words,while fast food is beneficial in the short-term,its long term effects are generally negative.

  By way of conclusion,I once again reaffirm my position that fast food has had a negative impact on our daily life because of its great harm to our health,even though it provided an incrediable convenient way for us to take meal.

  题目:

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

  Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Write at least 250 words.

  考官范文:

  As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.

  Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

  Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.

  Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

  小马网校有更多的资料:www.xiaoma.com.cn

  2009年8月22日 A 类写作

  Task One:

  The bar chart below shows the land damaged by tree-cutting,crop-farming, overgrazing in Africa, Asia, Australia, Europe.

  Task Two:

  News media has become influential to our life nowadays. Some people think that it is a negative development.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree

  2009年8月22日 G 类写作

  Task One:

  You are going to move out of the current living place.

  Write a letter about your accommodation to your English-speaking colleague who will be coming next month.

  1) why you gonna move out;

  2) describe the accommodation;

  3) why its suitable for your colleague .

  Task Two:

  People say that a childs success is dependent on the way parents bring them up,

  T o what extent do you agree or disagree

  2009年8月13日 A 类写作

  Task One:

  The two pie charts below show different age groups of the visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003.

  Task Two:

  The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree

  2009年8月8日 A 类写作

  Task One:

  The line chart below gives information about the oil production and oil consumption in China from 1982 to 2006.

  Task Two:

  The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other.

  In which way does it change the types of relationship that people make

  Does it have positive or negative effect on the development

  2009年8月8日 G 类写作

  Task One:

  A public event is to be held.Write a letter to your friend who may be interested in this event.This letter should include:

  1) introduce the event;

  2) explain why your friend will be interested in it;

  3) arrange the contents of the whole process

  Task Two:

  Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere.

  This has bad effects on our lifestyles and diet.

  Do you agree or not

  关于类别重复不一定,比如这个月考过关于教育的,下次考可能也会与教育沾边的,因为言之有理即可,所以一个问题可能覆盖面很广

  1. 小作文中频频出现地图题,这种题型在2000年之前是常考的,比如有问超市所选地点的图等,在2000年考过微波炉的工作原理之后就销声匿迹了将近7年,在2007年11月的第一次考试中又出现了地图题。其实地图题属于introduction类型的小作文,和我们经常看见的process/flow chart还有所区别,前者主要抓住流程,后者是介绍工作原理或是综合性说明的题型。今后考生要适当关注这种题型的复苏。

  2. 地图题有两种类型,一种是二选一类型,也就是说在两个地点中选择一个地点,可能是超市,可能是体育馆或机场,这样的话可以参考mini-mba的写作,进行swot分析,有点像大作文的框架,只不过内容要少得多。第二种是发展型的题目,就是阐述一个事物发展的过程,比如说火车轨道的发展,有点像流程图,但是区别在于流程图是好几张图,地图题还是一张图。

  3. 2008年,大作文中考官对你的文章会特别关注两个方面:一个是文章的段落安排。以前考官不会去关注文章的分段或层次,比如说你可以写一段超过100字的段落,其实最合理的段落字数分配应是30-60-60-60-30之类的文章,当然根据题型需要段落数可以不同,但是建议考生的opening和ending段不用写太多的字数。第二,考官对大作文评分标准的第二点cq(communicative quality)也十分严格,中国考生的文章往往让老外看得很累,原因是没有topic sentence的习惯,没有clear opinion的习惯,这其实是缺乏做outline的习惯,一篇观点清晰、表达明确的文章每一段的发展过程应是topic sentence+2(3) supporting sentences + minor example + flow-back sentence,这样的表达是最高效的,能够在可怜的阅卷时间中脱颖而出。

  4. 口语卡片三周内不用?近期考试的人发现,网上预测的卡片几乎在考试中从不考,原因在于考官深知以前10篇常见part one topics和12篇常见part two topics已经被考生捏死,大家当成圣经背,每次考完以后大家就会把考题相互散播,以便后来考生运用。所以近期考官明显加大了topic cards的跨度,对三周之内的卡片原则上不会再大幅使用。还需要指出的是,即使使用相同的卡片,提问的问题和方式也会有不同,比如有一个连续四年考试的卡片describe your favourite/meaningful photo,但是考官在里面可以随心所欲地提问,比如说问你do you like to store your pics in the computer or like to have them printed这些问题就非常地写意了,考生绝对不能以不变应万变,死背某些答案了。最后,第一阶段的提问加入了不少关于过去的提问,比如:when did you learn to use a computer 这些问题以前总在第二或第三部分出现,现在有提前的趋势,请考生加以注意。

  5. 半分标准的权威解析。对于2007年7月后出现的写作、口语设立半分的新要求,首先明确在写作中,每个task还是会给出整分(band 5/6/7/8),由于以前没有半分,那么主要看大作文的分数,比如task 1和task 2的分数分别为6和7分,那么总分一定为7分,如task 1和task 2的分数分别为5和7分,那么总分为6分,现在根据新的标准来说,前者还是7分,后者可以达到6.5分。所以总体上sub-band的设立总体对写作是有好处的。对于口语来说,传统四个评分模式(fluency/vocabulary/grammar/pronunciation)还是会打出整数分数,也不会有半分的出现。但是如果分别得到5/5/6/6,那么现在你的总分就是5.5,以前的打分是5分。

  6. 口语中pronunciation的打分是偶数级的,即2/4/6/8。以前的考生想拿7分,pronunciation就最好要拿到8分,这是十分困难的,拿到6分就十分被动了。现在即使拿到六分,只有保证在四个项目中拿到两个7分,就可以确保有6.5了。所以总体上讲,口语和写作的半分模式的设立对于考生总体上还是有利的。

  这个有套路,写成4段,首段介绍背景引出观点(2个都引)

  2段和3段主要论述2方观点,支持一个,反对一个(支持的那个写的多一点)

  4段总结,写己方观点

  aim to the job

  1,get salary , enhance living standard

  2,clear aim ,motivate university students

  3,learn more about the job ,in this way it can boot the technology

  aim to the society

  1,society provides students chances to learn ,so ,student should return

  2,responsibility

  3,selflessness

  序号之后的都是观点,楼主可以扩展,比如扩展成句子之后添加支持的论据

  个人有利观点

  1 个人有追求自己喜欢的工作的权利

  2 符合个人兴趣的职务才能够最大限度发挥潜质

  3 大学教育应该有个性 满足个人需求

  社会有利的观点

  1 个人的需求只有和社会的一致 才有利于社会的发展

  2 满足社会的需求 个人的价值才能最好的体现

  3 个人有义务为社会奉献自我

  4 大学是纳税人交钱建的 学生自然要为社会奉献

  谈论大学的目标:是有用的工作还是为人们或者社会带来好处

原创文章,作者:小雅,如若转载,请注明出处:https://www.tanglaohu.cn/6121.html

声明:本网站尊重并保护知识产权,根据《信息网络传播权保护条例》,如果我们转载的作品侵犯了您的权利,请在一个月内通知我们,邮箱:153055113@qq.com 我们会及时删除。

Like (0)
小雅的头像小雅作者
Previous 2024年1月14日
Next 2024年1月14日

相关推荐

  • 雅思苏州

    ?雅思苏州:  去苏州环球雅思看看,市区和基广场和佳福国际还有园区独墅湖都有校区。而且那边的老师都非常好,楼上说的沈老师我也上过她的课,蛮好的。然后雅思学习的话其实自身也很重要,一…

    2024年1月13日
    12500
  • 雅思阅读15

    ?雅思阅读15:  我知道世纪雅思有本《雅思9分密码-阅读》的书,很受用的!   调整一下心态,是在不行的可以和别人买预测,有些预测有时还是挺准的,至少中一篇,但是不推荐你,实在不…

    2024年3月16日
    12300
  • 移民雅思考试

    ?移民雅思考试:  报名的时候注册雅思常规类考试,遇到这个对话框点否。   普通类雅思考试通常是A类考试,用于移民的雅思考试移民局的要求是G类或生活技能类考试(具体参考移民类别),…

    2024年1月23日
    13400
  • 雅思考试分数

    ?雅思考试分数:  雅思考试分听说读写4个部分,成绩用band表示,每部分的满分为9段。总分是4个部分的平均。听力和阅读可以有0.5分,写作和口试只有整数分。计算总分的方法是四个部…

    2024年3月13日
    17600
  • 最好的雅思培训

    ?最好的雅思培训:  雅思培训机构推荐:环球、新航道、新动态、新东方、朗阁。   1、环球   广州市环球精英培训中心作为国内规模最大并首家在美国上市的连锁外语培训机构之一,为中国…

    2024年2月15日
    11900
  • 越南雅思

    ?越南雅思:  你好,关于越南考雅思会比泰国便宜吗   ◆越南   越南雅思报名费用约1350RMB,如果从上海来回机票稍高,约2600元,住宿一晚费用约250-1200元不等。 …

    2023年11月14日
    13400
  • 北京雅思培训机构排名

    ?北京雅思培训机构排名:  推荐华恒教育,好   北京的雅思培训机构大体就3个,环雅、朗阁、新东方,环雅与朗阁类似,主要是小班保分课程,新东方是老牌英语培训机构,英语方面的培训都做…

    2024年4月1日
    14900
  • 托福雅思报名

    ?托福雅思报名:  下面是转载的。【声明不是我写的】   没有条件,有钱,英语好就行,谁都可以考。   雅思成绩考出来可以去英联邦的国家留学(可以是本科和研究生),当然成绩要好才有…

    2024年1月13日
    11700
  • 雅思培训学费多少

    ?雅思培训学费多少:  新东方雅思教学前一般会先让你做一个英语基础水平测试,然后根据你的英语水平去推荐适合的班型。英语水平较好的同学可以选择大班(25人左右)的强化班,点题班,模考…

    2023年11月14日
    12500
  • 雅思托福分数换算

    ?雅思托福分数换算:  雅思6.5分相当于托福79-93分之间的成绩。托福考到80多分就相当于雅思6.5分的成绩   雅思与托福换算分数如下:   雅思 托福   6.0 79-8…

    2024年3月22日
    17400

发表回复

您的邮箱地址不会被公开。 必填项已用 * 标注