雅思考官范文

?雅思考官范文：
　　I am a college student now and the ideal job for me is a teacher.

　　For starters (pat推荐的开篇小词) ,I was told that being a teacher is one of the most worthy thing a person can be（teenage drama queen 里面的台词）.Teachers fill young minds with knowledge, but more importantly, give those minds a compass so that knowledge doesn’t go to waste（也是一个电影里面的台词，忘了电影名了，能搜到）.

　　Also, I’m crazy about kids. I’m pretty sure I will enjoy the time being with adorable children. I’ve pictured that moment in my dream many times.

　　As for the place I can be a teacher, I think schools would probably be the best. You know, most children study at schools. I will meet all kinds of lovely children there and it must be nice.(微笑一下，表情作高兴状)

　　I don’t care how many hours I will be working every day. Being a teacher would give me a better appreciation of life. You know, life is not always about how much you can get or how much you have spent, the true genius of life is about pursuing what you like. In contrast, I don’t think I would be delighted when I’m not what I wanna be, I don’t wanna be a businessman or a lawyer or something, even if I could be well-paid.

　　Anyway, it’s no exaggeration to say that teaching is the ideal job that I want to do later in my life.

　　你要是简单回答，在学校教书，每天工作八小时，就没话了。那样怎么凑时间呢？所以，就放开来扯一扯！！！这样时间就够了！而且也没有走题！（其实雅思口试关键也不是扣题，而是有话可说，说得好！）

　　考试放轻松一点不要紧张，说话表情自然点哈~

　　当时我准备雅思的理想工作的题材也是准备说老师的。原因：1.好说。2.咱了解啊。3.雅思考官都是至少5年的英语教师资历！你把老师这个职业夸夸（这个稿子也有夸）他们肯定高兴！

　　我雅思7~~以上基本也是从我准备雅思的材料中整合出来的，都算是有把握的语句~希望能帮到你

　　Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth, let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.　　The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to analyze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.　　Another reason is that if children work together, they could easily find out and supply their gaps. Because of limit of age, in order to children’s knowledge is limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.　　Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited. Lots of things are really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.　　In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how to work together, in order to their better future.

　　题目：Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits

　　范文：

　　Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

　　On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.

　　However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.

　　In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.

　　套话。有的考官这样讲是觉得你答的不错，有的考官纯粹是条件反射。

　　具体情况等成绩吧！不要太在意考官在考试的过程里和你说过什么，他们一般是比较公正的。

　　希望有帮到你！

　　雅思写作9分考官范文：电脑游戏是好还是坏，仅供同学们学习参考。　　题目：Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits　　范文：　　Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.　　On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.　　However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.　　In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.　　(258 words, band 9)

　　下面小马过河就给你举一个例子吧，你好好看看，考官是怎么批改作文的。

　　雅思作文这样批，系列一

　　在执教雅思写作的这些年中，我会发现，很多时候学生会从某某老师那里获取种种所谓的“黄金模板”，又或者是高举考前必备一本，视若雅思界的圣经。而不去管什么“碰文”。而最最难过的却是分数不给力，才知天道难酬勤!换个方式学吧，看看隔壁的“他”的作文中那些错误的背后是否隐藏了写作的某些玄机。

　　请看下面这个小作文的开头段，看似行文流水，实则欲哭无泪。

　　As can be seen from the table chart, it gives us the percentage of national consumer experience by category in 2002 in five different countries.谈及套句，小作文中“As can be seen from…”曾被列为小作文必备佳句，而孰不知此句虽好，但native speaker 常把它放在主体段落开头句。若论行文习惯，实在勉强。再者，“table chart”必会让考官在批卷的疲劳中会心一笑。但是烤鸭们，不知啊，你让他笑，他却让你人比黄花瘦，尽管他是那样的爱你。此短语翻译成中文叫“表格图”，考生自是觉得挺有中国风的感觉。但考官会认为是“这table就是表格，也就是图的一种，还后面要是再加一chart，再来一图。实为black sheep 一族”啊!南部陈更要翻译成“表格图图”实在是具有喜感啊!再论“us”一词，感觉倒是亲民派系， 考官考生一家人啊。但是，雅思写作，半学术文体，这词总有点较为随意。所以，宁为被动，隐去施动者，换成it can be seen ,或是it represents that 等句，或许会更好点。考生最无辜的地方就是下面的这个percentage。我们都知道，衣服表格不可能只有全图一个数据，又怎会遗忘名词单复数的问题呢最后那个“in 2002 in five different countries”，感觉起来好似是信息满满，不知道是否也是信心满满语法老师告诉我们：当句子中同时有地点状语和时间状语时,一般要把地点状语放在时间状语之前 。要知道，不走寻常路，那是考官的作风。考生要是也这样做，哭泣大于微笑。

　　基于上述段落的分析，不知道同学们是否也会有所收获其实开头段，自是不必非得写的那叫一个倾国倾城。简单大方，信息全面，能够统领全文，那就最好。你，懂得了吗

　　雅思作文这样批，系列二

　　People have, in rercent years, shown concern on the dire consequences of global warming and air pollution. Some people suggest that we should limit are travel(travelling) instead of car use. It seems to me that the objection against air travel is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes.(The)Vehicle is an integral segment of urban industrial civilization, mirroring contemporary life, in its best and unrest aspects.

　　Just as machinery is integral to industrialization, air is central to world economy.(有逻辑关系吗)Air travels make it possible for people to move around the world freely and quickly. Today, the tips can be completed in a matter of hours. One can attend a meeting in Pairs and dinner in New York the same day. There is a growing recognition that air travels have several advantages, while(连接词使用有误，改成meanwhile)it can(补上主语) ensures(删掉s) the growth of modern business such as international tourism, transportation and express delivery ,etc. Therefore, limiting air travel itself is a grave mistake ,that (非限定从句引导词改成which)would be a severe blow to these industries and may even damage world economy.