剑桥雅思9作文

?剑桥雅思9作文：
　　小作文的话使用剑桥雅思真题上面的即可；

　　大作文的话用分类题库上面的就行了，如果1个月后就要考试，可以结合考试预测上面的高危话题一起来备考。

　　同学您好：

　　其实这两种练习方式都是可以的，雅思写作练习还是关键在于练！

　　大作文写作先要分清几种大作文类型，按照类型分别训练。

　　想要多少分？

　　是的，剑桥后面的考官范文都是雅思写作最好的作文范本

　　范文如下：

　　happiness is very difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different people.while some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.yet others think that spiritual paths,rather than either the material world or relationships with people,are the only way to true happiness.

　　because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many differen ways,it is difficult to give any definition that is ture for everyone.however,if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge.a person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.

　　of course,factors such as loving relationships,good health,the skill to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too.but this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.

　　overall,i think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness.by that i mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives(the welfare of our families,the quality of our relationships,making other people happy,etc.)and what is not(a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things,etc.).

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　　范文:

　　The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.

　　We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5issatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities. Only 14f women and 10f men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63espectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3ere unhappy, whereas nearly 40f the men expressed their dissatisfaction.

　　Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.

　　– -lll

　　显然写作不是雅思最难的单项，应该排在口语之后。这也是中国国情决定的。中国考生重精听精读，轻写作口语，这是显而易见的。

　　其实听说读写中只有写作是非native speaker可以超过local的一项，且是唯一的一项。这一点慎小嶷老师早已提过，这里我就不再多说。

　　雅思写作评分标准如下：

　　tr(taskresponse任务完成情况)

　　这是评分标准中的第一项,具体体现在是否满足aie上。a指argument,即要有辩论;i指idea,即论点;e指evidence,即论据。

　　cc(coherence&cohension连贯和衔接)

　　连贯和衔接分为意连和形连两方面。所谓意连,指一个段落必须围绕一个主题句展开,前后在语意上达到统一和完整。体现在具体的雅思写作过程中时,我们要学会判断哪些观点和例证相符合。对于形连,它的主要表现形式是段落之间和段落内部的连接词。在写作过程中,我们要恰当使用表示承接和转折的连接词(如to begin with, in addition, however等)以及句子之间的指示词(this,it等)。

　　lr(lexicalresources词汇资源)

　　这一点虽然各种英语作文考试中都会涉及到,但雅思教会我们并不是尽可能使用大词,而是使用恰当的词表达确切的涵义。而且文章内部的语体、风格也要一致。这一过程中我们不但要掌握常用词的同义词,还要辨析其不同的适用语境,同时也要学会用自己的话进行转述。

　　比如对于题目要求的陈述,传统上学生习惯于将原题抄写一遍,对付汉语作文也不例外,但雅思规定抄原题不算字数。

　　gr&a(grammaticalrange&accuracy语法范围和精确度)

　　这又有别于传统的为了使用复杂句子而去使用的写作思路。因为除了要会用,还要用得准确和恰当。我们在准备雅思的过程中,不仅要学会如何造句,还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇。

　　当然，还有很多细枝末节的东西我这里就不写了。剑桥雅思系列里面有详细的解释。

　　你所谓的“中国首篇雅思作文”实际上已经没有参考价值了。毕竟今日雅思考试的难度不是n年前可以相比的。而且现在仅仅语法错误一项就可以让你的写作分数惨不忍睹。因为在评分标准中的第四条明确提到了“不仅要学会如何造句,还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇”。

　　考官的作文通常是剑桥雅思真题系列后面的范文，可以说是一个满分或者是接近满分的标准。而且考官都是接受过统一培训的，但是个人风格又不同，所以你说的“衡量其他作文”这种说法是不存在的。因为他们必须按照上述四点评分标准来对考生的作文进行评分。

　　雅思写作拿9分难度相当高这点我承认。但是就算听力和阅读，能拿9分的人也是需要相当高的人品值才能做到。只能说，对于大多数英语学习者来说，雅思单项在8分以上都是可遇不可求的事。但是你要是说最难的单项，必然还是口语了。

　　雅思作文任务完成度只占四分之一的成绩，而且一般而言你写啥观点都行，只要你能说通。所以正反都行，我习惯是写冷观点，和别人不一样，容易上分。不过具体看个人我把我写作思路搬上来吧，你借鉴下先说many people think this tendency will undermine the diversity of language seriously,yet I would state my objection to this issue after analyzing the following reasons.第一段写the preservation of these rare language will waste plenty of funds which should be used in many other fields contributing to society.然后写the disappearance of these language will remarkably benifit our daily communication.第三段我喜欢先列反方观点然后反驳，some people may say the diversity of language is a sigificant part of our culture,however,the importance of it is especially exaggerated.雅思写作主要还是语法单词架构，观点不能说不重要，但不必看的太重，真想不出来可以用网上的万能观点，联系经济社会教育等常见话题展开

　　每个人的基础不一样，而且看你要考的分数。一般来说都是至少要2个月的时间把真题过三遍（C4-C8 C9用来考试前一周做模拟）这个方法是新东方通用的。写作的话完全是凭实力的事情，一个月几乎不可能有提高。(指的当然是大作文，像小作文其实背背，练练手一个星期就搞定了)如果是第一次考就当去试试水吧，是深是浅一试便知，然后根据自己的要求努力。送你一句准备雅思的箴言，卡时间！每次做模拟都是一次考试完全按照一次考试坐（做）下来。PS：口语是四项当中唯一一个一个月可以搞定的单项。