雅思作文结尾

?雅思作文结尾：
　　When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

　　这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点，不是的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

　　无论是大多数考生备考雅思的过程中，还是从历年来雅思考试四项的中国考生平均分，都可以反映出中国考生在雅思写作方面的薄弱。因为写作是最能体现个人的语言运用能力和水平的，所以不像其他课程可以通过短期的特训得到很快的提高，而是要求考生花时间对词汇，句型，语法等等内容的整理，记忆，以及运用。

　　在具体写作的过程中，考生要遇到的第一步事情应该是引言段的写作。俗话说，万事开头难。很多考生不知道如何开头，浪费时间，导致无法在规定时间内完成250个单词的大作文。其实，引言段可先通过对background 的描写来引出话题。

　　ii background 方法介绍

　　总结归纳background的写作，认为应该从内容同句型上同时做到补充。下面先介绍下扩充背景句的方法：

　　1）. 追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题，考生要尽量在考前做练习，这样在考试就可以得心应手了。

　　请看下面的例子：

　　there are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. what forms do they take do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones (高分范文p76)

　　这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone，所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑，就是科技的繁荣，而科技的繁荣，手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末，这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如

　　… (time) witnessed …

　　这个背景句就可以写成： the late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

　　再看一例：

　　nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. what is your opinion

　　这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。那从传统观点来看，大学是传授知识的地方，为什么会提出要传授技能呢，所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下，大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了，所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。那当然还是要结合句型，这里可以用as 引导的原因状语从句。

　　参考：as job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

　　2）. 重述法。即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。

　　请看一例：

　　nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. state the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。

　　本题的话题关于压力，那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题，考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况，即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。

　　参考: it is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from

　　很多考生拿到大作文考题都不知道如何动笔去写开头段,有的会把题目原封不动抄下来,但如果这样做,在统计作文字数时,第一段就不被统计在内了.实际上,大作文的第一段是情景铺垫,洛阳大华雅思建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论/解决什么问题及问题的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面：

　　1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon.

　　2)一些人的观点(some peoples opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排.

　　3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要.

　　大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完.因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况：

　　1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多.这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做：

　　主动语态被动语态

　　主谓宾主系表

　　某些近义词互换

　　Example:

　　At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree

　　→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可.

　　2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右.这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数：

　　把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息.

　　Example:

　　International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems

　　→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourisms gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

　　追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比.

　　Example:

　　International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems

　　→Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

　　3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息.这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述.

　　Example:

　　The best way to solve the worlds environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree

　　→In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

　　另外,要提醒考生注意的是开首段一定要避免出现语法错误,因为如果语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分也不会很高.

　　无论是大多数考生备考雅思的过程中，还是从历年来雅思考试四项的中国考生平均分，都可以反映出中国考生在雅思写作方面的薄弱。因为写作是最能体现个人的语言运用能力和水平的，所以不像其他课程可以通过短期的特训得到很快的提高，而是要求考生花时间对词汇，句型，语法等等内容的整理，记忆，以及运用。

　　在具体写作的过程中，考生要遇到的第一步事情应该是引言段的写作。俗话说，万事开头难。很多考生不知道如何开头，浪费时间，导致无法在规定时间内完成250个单词的大作文。其实，引言段可先通过对background 的描写来引出话题。

　　ii background 方法介绍

　　总结归纳background的写作，认为应该从内容同句型上同时做到补充。下面先介绍下扩充背景句的方法：

　　1）. 追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题，考生要尽量在考前做练习，这样在考试就可以得心应手了。

　　请看下面的例子：

　　there are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. what forms do they take do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones (高分范文p76)

　　这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone，所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑，就是科技的繁荣，而科技的繁荣，手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末，这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如

　　… (time) witnessed …

　　这个背景句就可以写成： the late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

　　再看一例：

　　nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. what is your opinion

　　这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。那从传统观点来看，大学是传授知识的地方，为什么会提出要传授技能呢，所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下，大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了，所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。那当然还是要结合句型，这里可以用as 引导的原因状语从句。

　　参考：as job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

　　2）. 重述法。即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。

　　请看一例：

　　nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. state the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。

　　本题的话题关于压力，那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题，考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况，即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。

　　参考: it is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from

　　我来写个吧

　　In the present age, ….. are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句写社会背景想要介绍下不好的现象也可以这样写 In the present age, the issue of… is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether…(这个地方写要辩论的话题，改写下题目好了）has sparked much debate. Some people argue that…. while many other consider that… Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(后者）view.

　　结尾：

　　In summary, I would concede that…m even though…, Overall, I am convinced that… should…

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